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09/23/06 @ 6pm

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haiku

veneer

do your very best,
but there will always be flaws
you cannot obscure.


7 Comments

Posted by
575
23 September 2006 @ 6pm

the alternate version (different closing line):

do your very best,
but there will always be flaws
for which you’ll be judged.


Posted by
Ellen
23 September 2006 @ 7pm

Even at my worst
My flaws are my flaws, thank you
All mine to embrace


Posted by
575
23 September 2006 @ 7pm

you make a good point;
this haiku was all about
acceptance, not dread.


Posted by
hototogisu
23 September 2006 @ 9pm

so true …


Posted by
mikaelah
23 September 2006 @ 9pm

doing my very worst
there will always be perfections
I cannot obscure.


Posted by
liquidquick
23 September 2006 @ 10pm

what you see as ‘flaw’
another might see as an
expression of grace


Posted by
Ellen
24 September 2006 @ 10am

A flaw, a virtue
or neither – depends on when
we chose to reveal

*******
judge me, admire
me; adore me, despise me;
but I need to love me.