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Posted
10/05/06 @ 4am

Tagged
haiku

eliptical orbits

following the hips,
mesmerized and hypnotized
by motion like this.


3 Comments

Posted by
D. B. Cooper
5 October 2006 @ 4pm

I can’t stop looking.
Swinging with the precision
of a metronome.


Posted by
howard
6 October 2006 @ 2am

(ah, the metronome – great imagery. wish i’d thought of it)


Posted by
D. B. Cooper
6 October 2006 @ 3am

That’s the cool thing about the haiku to me. Reading it inspires it.