the smedley log - suburban scrawl

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Posted
02/18/07 @ 2pm

Tagged
haiku

just in case

just before we go,
just a whisper to confirm
what you should have known.


2 Comments

Posted by
Frank
22 February 2007 @ 10am

That is lyrical. It really could be the hook in a song.


Posted by
howard
22 February 2007 @ 3pm

Yeah, I liked it. I don’t really know what it’s about, but that just makes it more adaptable (for when I write the rest of the song?)