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Posted
12/12/07 @ 7am

Tagged
haiku, relationships

one that got away

wanting her happy
should’ve been more important
than just wanting her.


4 Comments

Posted by
Frank
12 December 2007 @ 10am

Wow, that one is so compelling…and gave me a chill.


Posted by
tracy
12 December 2007 @ 5pm

Nice poem,sad but nice.


Posted by
howard
14 December 2007 @ 3pm

Thanks for the compliments!

Sad but nice, Tracy? You make it sound like an exceptional combination, but I’ve found the two often go hand in hand. Most of life’s lessons don’t occur without some degree of sadness.


Posted by
tracy
14 December 2007 @ 11pm

I guess you maybe wouldn’t appreicate a relationship as much without a little sadness. I hope there are happier times ahead for you.