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09/11/06 @ 2am

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Five

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I wasn’t going to post much along the lines of this unfortunate anniversary, partly because I knew I couldn’t add to the grand discourse on the subject. That, and I find many of the statements being carved out on 9/11 are in tones that I wouldn’t want to duplicate on my worst day. So, to avoid sounding like a partisan idiot, a conspiracy theorist or a 21st century internet philosopher, I decided to abstain from waxing eloquent about the greatest domestic tragedy of my lifetime. At least that’s what I meant to do.

But I couldn’t sleep this morning, so I pulled out an old draft of a poem I’d been writing a few years ago. I won’t pretend to speak to the grand truths of tragedies like 9/11; I just wanted to offer this vague, personal remembrance. I figured it was about time to send a small tribute:

Manahawkin,
on the way
to the shore
on sunny days.
We were walkin’
‘cross the sand;
never saw it slippin’
through our hands.
Twilight talkin’
on the beach,
while our dreams were all
still within reach.

Manahawkin,
William Cook
Boulevard -
you made me look
as I was drivin’
out your way,
I was wonderin’
whatever became

of you,
but I recall

Manahawkin,
was the way
to the shore
on a sunny day,
but Manahawkin
never stays;
the more I strain, the
more you fade away.

-for K.S.

Some more remembrances can be found at 2,996. And for simple emotional response, this poignant expression from Gigglechick. And a list of locals with thoughts is up at Philly Future.

Also, if you are so inclined, you can view the film 7 Days in September via Google Video


6 Comments

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Posted by
Ellen
11 September 2006 @ 8pm

nice job – very touching


Posted by
howard
12 September 2006 @ 6am

Thank you very much, Ellen.


Posted by
Omni
14 September 2006 @ 5pm

I choke up every time I see that picture…


Posted by
howard
15 September 2006 @ 7am

Me too, Omni. The experience it brings back for me is from my first time back up to NYC after 9/11 (in June, 2002).

A bunch of us were riding together up the Jersey turnpike. It was a Sunday morning and I was half-asleep, but the sight of the skyline gave me a strange, almost nightmarish jolt. The visual reality of the absence of those towers gripped me in the way that something does when you know about it, but it hasn’t really hit home until just then.

I had already known the towers were gone, but it was at that very moment the reality of their absence hit me.


Posted by
Frank
16 September 2006 @ 1pm

Wow…”the more I strain/the more you fade away.” Excellent.


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